“Where am I?” “I think you know.” Benjamin’s gaze swept over the surroundings. He was met with an abyss of unending darkness. It wasn’t like a moonless night, where faint shadows and distant objects could be seen. There was no depth, no play of shadows, and no lingering sounds—only an all-consuming void of silence and blackness.
Wow, Scott! You have demonstrated a brand new expertise here with this story. The first three paragraphs are the most lyrical I have ever seen from you. Such a departure in subject and style -- and such an un-expected ending. I did not predict it. Congratulations!
Excellent use of dialogue. Enjoyed the story very much!
Great story, beautiful. It really has me thinking.
This is such an awesome story, Scott! I love the premise, the characters, everything about it. Great stuff!
Really interesting take on the prompt!
This was a deeply interesting story! I really enjoyed putting the dots together. I'm intrigued by the moral epiphany towards the end. Very cool!
Taking the "up against a cliff" idea and making into a moral precipice was a master stroke. Well done!
Wow, Scott! You have demonstrated a brand new expertise here with this story. The first three paragraphs are the most lyrical I have ever seen from you. Such a departure in subject and style -- and such an un-expected ending. I did not predict it. Congratulations!