Thanks Sarah, this general idea of the afterlife has been in my head for some time, I thought I would use this prompt to explore it. I am glad you liked it.
Wow, Scott! You have demonstrated a brand new expertise here with this story. The first three paragraphs are the most lyrical I have ever seen from you. Such a departure in subject and style -- and such an un-expected ending. I did not predict it. Congratulations!
Excellent use of dialogue. Enjoyed the story very much!
Thanks so much Joleen. It was fun to write.
Great story, beautiful. It really has me thinking.
Thanks Hermann, This notion of the afterlife has always intrigued me.
This is such an awesome story, Scott! I love the premise, the characters, everything about it. Great stuff!
Thanks so much Justin. I am happy folks have liked this story.
Really interesting take on the prompt!
Thanks Sarah, this general idea of the afterlife has been in my head for some time, I thought I would use this prompt to explore it. I am glad you liked it.
This was a deeply interesting story! I really enjoyed putting the dots together. I'm intrigued by the moral epiphany towards the end. Very cool!
Thanks, it was fun to write, it was a challenge to get under 1000 words.
I definitely know what you mean. It was a real struggle for me, too!
Taking the "up against a cliff" idea and making into a moral precipice was a master stroke. Well done!
Thanks, I have been struggling to understand this afterlife stuff for a long time, still working it out.
Wow, Scott! You have demonstrated a brand new expertise here with this story. The first three paragraphs are the most lyrical I have ever seen from you. Such a departure in subject and style -- and such an un-expected ending. I did not predict it. Congratulations!
Thanks, I am trying new things.