“...the engine came to life in a wing-ding-ding sound and a cloud of smoke that had an oily smell.”
“I stomped into my room, slammed the door, and lay face down on my bed.” “Dad was standing in the driveway, grinning.” These are the sentences that make us feel what you felt, see what you saw, hear what you heard. Nice work. Justin.
Scott, this is great--I hear your voice loud and clear, and all the details just really ring true. My brother was into motorcycles, but they scared the shit out of me for some reason so I stayed away.
“...the engine came to life in a wing-ding-ding sound and a cloud of smoke that had an oily smell.”
“I stomped into my room, slammed the door, and lay face down on my bed.” “Dad was standing in the driveway, grinning.” These are the sentences that make us feel what you felt, see what you saw, hear what you heard. Nice work. Justin.
Thanks Sharron. Appreciate it.
Wonderful, just wonderful, Scott!
Thanks Rebecca, It is one of my best childhood memories.
It really shows. Great work!
I Have the Money is a delightful story. I felt I was seeing the world through a fourteen-year-old's eyes.
Thanks Bill, I am glad I was able to capture a very memorable time in my life.
Scott, this is great--I hear your voice loud and clear, and all the details just really ring true. My brother was into motorcycles, but they scared the shit out of me for some reason so I stayed away.
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments