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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Nice shift from past to present here., Scott. Looking forward to seeing how you tie them together in the next episode! You have created two distinct characters and their connection is strong.

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Scott Ocamb's avatar

Thanks Sharron. My plan is to have them grow in the rest of this episode and throughout the series. Some of their details are unfolding as I write this. I do not know exactly what will happen to them.

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James Ron's avatar

So easy to like your characters! Will be following the Quest.

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Scott Ocamb's avatar

Thanks James, happy to have you follow the brothers.

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