Trevor gently set his beer on the high-top table. “Is Dad still pissed?” Rapidly tapping his foot, Bradford sighed. “Yes, very, very pissed.”
Nice shift from past to present here., Scott. Looking forward to seeing how you tie them together in the next episode! You have created two distinct characters and their connection is strong.
So easy to like your characters! Will be following the Quest.
Nice shift from past to present here., Scott. Looking forward to seeing how you tie them together in the next episode! You have created two distinct characters and their connection is strong.
So easy to like your characters! Will be following the Quest.