Such a great premise for this story, Scott-- two men dealing with their monumental grief by giving to others! Beautiful! I can see this story continue with a combination of the joy of open-road riding and of meeting new people who are desperate for help. This line broke my heart "With a sly smile he said, “Because we want to help you pick out your first Harley when you turn sixteen.” Keep going, Scott. This has great promise!
Such a great premise for this story, Scott-- two men dealing with their monumental grief by giving to others! Beautiful! I can see this story continue with a combination of the joy of open-road riding and of meeting new people who are desperate for help. This line broke my heart "With a sly smile he said, “Because we want to help you pick out your first Harley when you turn sixteen.” Keep going, Scott. This has great promise!