Such a great premise for this story, Scott-- two men dealing with their monumental grief by giving to others! Beautiful! I can see this story continue with a combination of the joy of open-road riding and of meeting new people who are desperate for help. This line broke my heart "With a sly smile he said, “Because we want to help you pick out your first Harley when you turn sixteen.” Keep going, Scott. This has great promise!
Such a great premise for this story, Scott-- two men dealing with their monumental grief by giving to others! Beautiful! I can see this story continue with a combination of the joy of open-road riding and of meeting new people who are desperate for help. This line broke my heart "With a sly smile he said, “Because we want to help you pick out your first Harley when you turn sixteen.” Keep going, Scott. This has great promise!
Thanks Sharron, appreciate your encouragement.