Beautifully written, well edited. Scott, you gave this to us as if it just occurred yesterday - immediate, alive, frightening. I can see why taking to the road was so compelling. I wonder if finding out what eventually happened to your mom in the end is essential for us to know? Maybe this provided enough for us to imagine the rest? Sharron at 🍁Leaves
Just found you Scott and I would keep reading, I was hooked.
Beautifully written, well edited. Scott, you gave this to us as if it just occurred yesterday - immediate, alive, frightening. I can see why taking to the road was so compelling. I wonder if finding out what eventually happened to your mom in the end is essential for us to know? Maybe this provided enough for us to imagine the rest? Sharron at 🍁Leaves
Scott, this is really strong--very emotionally absorbing, and I’d want to read more.
Wow, what a great opening, Scott! That would definitely keep me reading. 👍
Pretty compelling opening, Scott. Hard to put that down....